We see...
A single fencing strip illuminated by an overhead spotlight. This is the stage in her mind where every move is rehearsed--where her practice has made her perfect. Every point of every bout played out over and over again. Two steps ahead. Three steps. Her inner dialogue: "Step here, and I lose. Move there, then there... no good." It's a high speed chess match that Lee can see better than anyone. "There it is. An opening. Under, over, then, flick... I win." Deep breath. And she thinks, "But it's so much more than my victory."
Lee Kiefer came to Notre Dame the #1 foilest in the country. She's leaving #1 in the world.
Links to reference material to help visualize mood, theme, and style.
Links to reference material to help visualize mood, theme, and style.
From the movie Premium Rush starring Joseph Gordon-Levitt. We might add voice over and sound design to emphasize that this is high-speed chess and Lee is always thinking 2 or 3 steps ahead. She sees things before they happen and sets up her shots like no one else in the world.
From the short film Nzingha by Anderson Wright. We love the hyper-real lighting. This is Lee's headspace, a dream world where she perfects her moves and sees victory before it happens.
3:45pm Cody and Cotton arrive at Bluegrass Fencer's Club
570 Delzan Place, Suite 28, Lexington, KY 40503
Located on the second floor of the Kethshire Place shopping plaza. Enter the building through the corner doors between Brooklyn Pizza and the Tae Kwon Do studio.
B-roll and sound--fly on the wall, verité style.
Lee arriving, getting gear out of car, walking across parking lot, entering front door.
warming up, drills, practice, getting instruction from coach
Will stay only as long as we need to get good b-roll and will try to not to interrupt or get in the way.
Early AM golden hour if Lee is available
B-roll of Lee “driving home” to Lexington
Horse farms/country side (Need Lee in this shot. Cody will scout and locate exactly where to go)
“Welcome to Lexington” sign (would be much better with Lee in this shot)
Lexington skyline (with or without Lee)
Kentucky flavor/contrast to South Bend (do not need Lee for this)
5:00pm crew call and preproduction meeting in FIM green couches area.
5:30 Setup cameras, lighting and sound in arena, hallway, and locker room. Possibly film some of the live fencing practice.
6:30 haze test. camera tests.
7:00 break for pizza in fencing lounge. (save some for fencers if they haven't arrived yet).
8:00 Hallway Scene 1 "Arrival"
8:15Locker Room Scene
9:00 Hallway Scene 2 "Gladiator"
9:30 Practice scene in reality lighting with all fencers (if we didn't get enough at 5:30.
9:45 "3 Steps Ahead" scene
10:30 "Dream Alone" posed shots
10:45 Crew wrap and tear down. Cody and Lee record Lee's VO in FIM studio
11:00 wrap.
Lee only.
1. WS shuttle dolly floor level dolly-in as Lee walks toward camera down hallway then leaves frame to go into locker room.
2. Gimbal over Lee's shoulder as she enters hallway walks down to locker room and enters locker room and leaves frame.
3. Gimbal narrow DOF shot of NCAA champions signs on hallway wall as Lee enters hallway and walks to locker room.
Lee with at least one other female fencer in background.
1. WS getting dressed in gear--specifically want to see the application of plastic torso plate
2. MS same
3. CU same but focus on straps, buttons, texture
4. CU same but focus on Lee's face, putting up her hair, etc.
5. WS (gimbal or locked down or dolly?) Lee geard up but sitting in solitude in front of her locker--focused. Beat, deep breath, stands, and walks out of frame.
6. MS same
7. CU same
8. Gimbal follow lee out of locker room. cut once we're out the door to hallway.
Lee only.
1. WS Gimbal over Lee's shoulder as she leaves the locker room, enters the hallway, walks down to arena gate and leaves frame.
2. MS same action
3. CU same action
THEN, turn dream lighting and haze off. And do the same 3 shots in "reality lighting".
Lee, Sabrina, Gerrick, and other fencers and possibly Gia.
1. various beauty and action shots of Lee and other fencers and coach gia.
Lee and Sabrina or one other fencer.
1.A) MS or CU push-in to ECU of Lee's face--reveal the eyes through the mask.
1.B) Cut back to CU push in to ECU of Lee's face--eyes through the mask. Her eyes move left to right.
1.C) CU push in to ECU of Lee's face--eyes through the mask. deep breath and blink.
1.D) Cut back to CU push in to ECU of Lee's face--eyes through the mask smile and begin to move out of frame (left or right based on Lee's choreography).
2.A) WS of opponent (Sabrina?) facing directly into lens with Lee's right arm and foil in foreground (possibly over Lee's right shoulder to allow lee to move in front of camera and to come into full view as she executes her first move in her "mind's eye"--super slowmo.
2.B) WS over Lees right shoulder and elevated a little to see all the action. Lee moves forward away from camera and comes into full view as she executes the FIRST MOVE--speed ramped to full speed in post.
2.C) WS over Lees right shoulder and elevated a little to see all the action. Lee moves forward away from camera and comes into full view as she executes the SECOND MOVE.
2.D) WS over Lees right shoulder and elevated a little to see all the action. Lee moves forward away from camera and comes into full view as she executes the THIRD MOVE successfully.
3.A) CU of Lee's feet moving for the attack FIRST MOVE
3.B) CU of Lee's feet moving for the attack SECOND MOVE
3.C) CU of Lee's feet moving for the attack THIRD MOVE
4.A) ECU of RED TIP of OPPONENT'S foil hitting Lee's chest plate to score against her. FIRST MOVE
4.B) ECU of RED TIP of OPPONENT'S foil hitting Lee's chest plate to score against her. SECOND MOVE
4.C) ECU of BLUE TIP of LEE'S foil hitting her OPPONENT'S chest plate for victory. THIRD MOVE
5.A) MS DOLLY IN of score board light (RED)
5.B) CU DOLLY IN of score board light (RED)
5.C) ECU DOLLY IN of score board light (GREEN)
6.A) MS of LEE as she rips her mask off and yells in frustration (level 5).
6.B) MS of LEE as she rips her mask off and yells in triumph (level 7-10).
6.C) MS of LEE lifting her mask. Deep breath. Smiles and nods in victory (level 2-3 option).
7.A) CU of Lee's foil clashing with opponent FIRST MOVE
7.B) CU of Lee's foil clashing with opponent SECOND MOVE
7.C) CU of Lee's foil clashing with opponent THIRD MOVE
Lee by herself
1. various shots of posed and choreographed action
Lee voice over: "Fencing is beautiful... and violent. Every move is so fast. It's not just high speed chess; it's more like hyper-speed chess. Double touches are scored within 40 miliseconds. It takes the average person 400 miliseconds to blink. So, yeah; you can win or lose, literally within the blink of an eye. And my goal--is to stay 3 steps ahead."
1.A) MS or CU push-in to ECU of Lee's face--reveal the eyes through the mask.
cut or whip-pan to
2.A) WS of opponent (Sabrina?) facing directly into lens with Lee's right arm and foil in foreground (possibly over Lee's right shoulder to allow lee to move in front of camera and to come into full view as she executes her first move in her "mind's eye"--super slowmo.
VO LEE: "If I perry here, feint left, and go for center mass?" Motion graphics lines, diagrams, calculations, routing her foil's path.
2.B) WS over Lees right shoulder and elevated a little to see all the action. Lee moves forward away from camera and comes into full view as she executes the FIRST MOVE--speed ramped to full speed in post.
3.A) CU of Lee's feet moving for the attack
Sound FX shoes squeak and shuffle, foils clash.
4.A) ECU of RED TIP of OPPONENT'S foil hitting Lee's chest plate to score against her.
Sound FX Score board buzzer echoes
5.A) CU of score board light (RED).
VO LEE: "Ahh. No good."
1.B) Cut back to CU push in to ECU of Lee's face--eyes through the mask. Her eyes move left to right.
VO LEE: "Look at her shoulder. set it up. there's got to be an opening... " Motion graphics lines, diagrams, calculations showing a target.
2.C) WS over Lees right shoulder and elevated a little to see all the action. Lee moves forward away from camera and comes into full view as she executes the SECOND MOVE.
Sound FX shoes squeak and shuffle, foils clash.
4.B) ECU of RED TIP of OPPONENT'S foil hitting Lee's chest plate (different for FIRST MOVE) to score against her.
Sound FX Score board sounds buzzer.
5.B) CU of score board light (RED)
6.A) MS of LEE as she rips her mask off and yells in frustration (level 5).
VO LEE: "Nope."
1.C) CU push in to ECU of Lee's face--eyes through the mask. deep breath and blink.
VO LEE: "Focus."
Motion graphics lines, diagrams, calculations showing a green-target" The correct path to victory.
1.D) Cut back to CU push in to ECU of Lee's face--eyes through the mask smile and begin to move out of frame (left or right based on Lee's choreography).
2.D) WS over Lees right shoulder and elevated a little to see all the action. Lee moves forward away from camera and comes into full view as she executes the THIRD MOVE successfully.
3.B) CU of Lee's feet moving for the attack
7) CU of Lee's foil
4.C) ECU of BLUE TIP of LEE'S foil hitting her OPPONENT'S chest plate.
5.C) CU of score board light (GREEN)
6.B) MS of LEE as she rips her mask off and yells in triumph (level 7-10).
alternate*
6.C) MS of LEE lifting her mask. Deep breath. Smiles and nods in victory (level 2-3 option).